Thursday, February 28, 2013

Franklin Leonard,CEO of The Black List, to Guest USA Scriptchat March 3, 2013


Franklin Leonard @franklinleonard is the creator of the Black List @theblcklst and co-creator of Blcklst.com, a yearly publication highlighting Hollywood’s most popular unproduced screenplays and its ongoing home on the web. 

Over 220 Black List scripts have been produced as feature films earning more than 148 Academy Award nominations including two of the last four BestPictures and five of the last ten screenwriting Oscars. Franklin has worked in development at Universal Pictures and the production companies of Will Smith, Sydney Pollack and Anthony Minghella, Leonardo DiCaprio, and John Goldwyn. Before Los Angeles and all things film related, Franklin was - atdifferent times - a business analyst at McKinsey & Co., a weekly columnist for the Trinidad Guardian in Port-au-Spain, Trinidad, and the communications director for John Cranley's 2000 campaign for the U.S. House of Representatives in Ohio's first district.   

He’s a magna cum laude graduate of Harvard University. Since 2010, he has been named one of Hollywood Reporter’s 30 Under 30, Black Enterprise magazine’s “40 Emerging Leaders for Our Future,” AOL Black Voices “30 Black Hollywood Game Changers” and Fast Company’s “100 Most Creative People in Business.”

Sunday, February 17, 2013

Jeff Lyons, founder of Storygeeks - Transcript 2-17-13


Jeff Lyons was our guest for both Euro and USA chat.

Euro moderator: Teenie Russell
USA moderator: Zac Sanford and Jamie Livingston

EURO CHAT

2013-02-17 8:00 pm teenierussell It's #SCRIPTCHAT O'CLOCK! Tonight we are joined by @Storygeeks
as we chat about Ideas Testing and Stories #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:00 pm Storygeeks Hello scriptchat-folks-in-Europe! I'm here---so fire away n #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:00 pm TaroJ #scriptchat Hi
2013-02-17 8:01 pm teenierussell You can read Jeff's Bio here - http://t.co/FPBQW4wx #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:01 pm Storygeeks Great to b here again ... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:01 pm teenierussell @Storygeeks Hi Jeff, thank you for joining us! #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:01 pm teenierussell RT @Storygeeks: Hello scriptchat-folks-in-Europe! Im here---so fire
away #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:02 pm Storygeeks FYI... I have quite a lag on posts... :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:02 pm writingnewman #scriptchat friends, here's a sketch written and directed by ya boy at
FvF. http://t.co/iIW5u22q
2013-02-17 8:03 pm Storygeeks I gave a workshop yesterday... and asked the qeustion "what is a
story" #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:03 pm Storygeeks I got as many responses as there were participants... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:03 pm Storygeeks how is that possible? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:04 pm Storygeeks you'd think a bunch of writers would have a consensus on this
question... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:04 pm Storygeeks NOT! #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:04 pm teenierussell @Storygeeks So, ideas testing. I try to write loglines for ideas to see if
they are going anywhere. #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:04 pm tracinell Tonight's #scriptchat! :) http://t.co/IwRTSXgc #screenwriting
2013-02-17 8:05 pm Storygeeks @teenierussel ... so what do you mean by a log line :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:05 pm TaroJ @Storygeeks what was your most surprising answer? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:05 pm vickyhinault Hi #scriptchat !
2013-02-17 8:05 pm Storygeeks @teenierusell ... hwo are you defining this term? I have a reason for
asking... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:06 pm teenierussell @vickyhinault Hi Vicky! #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:06 pm Storygeeks @Taroj.... most surprising was the long, blank stare...n #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:07 pm TaroJ @Storygeeks ha :-) how would you answer what a story is? #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:07 pm Storygeeks When testing a story idea... you should never start with the log line...
always start with the premise line ... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:07 pm teenierussell @Storygeeks a logline for me will tell me in just a couple of lines what
the story is #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:07 pm Storygeeks Premise line and log line are very different things.. #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:08 pm teenierussell @Storygeeks what is a premise line? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:08 pm Storygeeks @Taroj... a story is: a metaphor for a human being on a journey
where they change in the end. #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:09 pm Storygeeks @teenierussell... glad you asked :)n #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:09 pm frogfall Hi. Would the "story" simply be what people say when you ask "what
is the movie about"? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:09 pm TaroJ RT @Storygeeks: @Taroj... a story is: a metaphor for a human being
on a journey where they change in the end. #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:09 pm Storygeeks Premise line is: the right, natural, and true sturcture of your story told
in one sentence #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:10 pm Storygeeks Log line is : the high concept of your story expressed as a SHORT
one-liner #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:11 pm Storygeeks @frogfall... no... story means soemthing specific... very specific... (see
my post a sec ago). #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:11 pm BrevityRulesOK #scriptchat Nice to be here. #
2013-02-17 8:11 pm Storygeeks Always start witht he premise line... that will save your bacon... you
have to know if you have a story BEFORE you start writing #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:12 pm scriptguyphil @Storygeeks can you give an example of a premise line please? #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:12 pm Storygeeks The premise line is the only way for you to know that ... but you have
to know what a premise line is... most writers don't #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:12 pm teenierussell @Storygeeks so beginning, middle and end, tell it as it is rather than
try to sell the idea? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:12 pm Storygeeks They think the premise line is only for pitching... WRONGG! #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:13 pm teenierussell @BrevityRulesOK Hi Michael, lovely to see you here #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:13 pm scriptguyphil #scriptchat and sorry for jumping in without saying hi - 'HI'!!
2013-02-17 8:14 pm LeeZJessup RT @ozzywood: Scriptmag : Get A New Story - Are You Really Too
Busy to Write http://t.co/KZ3Z4mbl #screenwriting #amwriting #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:14 pm teenierussell @scriptguyphil Hi Phil! #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:15 pm LisaFromNYC Hi all. Catching up on the posts #ScriptChat
2013-02-17 8:15 pm BrevityRulesOK RT @scriptguyphil: @Storygeeks can you give an example of a
premise line please? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:16 pm Storygeeks @scriptguyphil... Godfather: When the innocent, youngest son of a
powerful mafia Godfather discovers #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:16 pm Storygeeks he agrees to join the family to exact revenge and re-establish the
family’s honor, #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:16 pm teenierussell @LisaFromNYC Hi Lisa! #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:17 pm Storygeeks until his actions force him to cross a line he was never meant to cross,
dooming him to become the next Godfather. #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:17 pm LisaFromNYC @Storygeeks when you say premise are you referring to theme? #
ScriptChat
2013-02-17 8:17 pm Storygeeks That is the premise for the Godfather II... more than just beginning
middle end... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:17 pm Storygeeks It reveals the entire structure of the story!!! #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:17 pm scriptguyphil @Storygeeks - thanks jeff, but how would you say that is different to
the logline? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:18 pm Storygeeks @lisafromnyc... NOOOOO.. theme is not premise... see my earlier
post ... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:18 pm BrevityRulesOK Thanks on the premise line of the G-father. What makes that different
to a logline of the same movie? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:18 pm Storygeeks Log line is the high concept... liek for the movie jaws... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:19 pm Storygeeks Premise:When a big city cop moves to a small coastal town
dependent on tourism, #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:19 pm Storygeeks he must team with a crusty sailor and an oceanographer to convince
the doubting, money-grubbing townsfolk #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:19 pm frogfall @Storygeeks So if that "jpurneying" human did not undergo a
change, there would be no story? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:19 pm Storygeeks to close their beaches due to a giant man-eating shark, until the shark
strikes, #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:20 pm Storygeeks thus forcing the townsfolk to allow the cop and his buddies to take on
the shark mano-a-mano. #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:20 pm Storygeeks that's the premise.... Logline: Giant, monster shark terrorizes small
coastal town.n #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:21 pm Storygeeks See the difference between a logline and premise line????? Very
IMPORTANT distinctios... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:21 pm Storygeeks Most writers dont' know this... nor do development executives!!! I
might add #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:22 pm teenierussell @Storygeeks I think what you call a premise is what I've always
referred to as a logline, I wonder if it's a US vs UK thing? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:22 pm Storygeeks @frogfall.... YEP... if no change... then what's the point??? All you
have is a situation.. a problem to be solved #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:23 pm Storygeeks @frogfall.... ala Cloverfield... no story therre... just a situation to be
solved... " gotta havve a human being changing... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:24 pm Storygeeks @teenierussell.... HA .. no it's a story thing!!!! Not cultural... #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:24 pm teenierussell When I first started writing, I used to jump into the writing without a
premise line or even an outline - waste of time #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:25 pm BrevityRulesOK Can you clue us into the difference between premise and theme? #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:25 pm Storygeeks @teenierussell... YYYESSS... exactly... you set yourself up for a
painful process... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:25 pm Storygeeks @scriptguyphil.... they you Europeans are on the right track :) #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:26 pm Storygeeks @BrevityRulesok... Premise is the entire structgure of your story in
one line... theme is the moral question... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:26 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... you are trying to convey... BIG DIFFERENCE #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:27 pm Bang2write @scriptguyphil yes seconded Phil, often phrased here as the "What if
...?" Question @Storygeeks #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:27 pm writerscanvas RT @jeannevb: Tonight on EURO & USA #scriptchat guest
@storygeeks talking what makes a story a story http://t.co/zzqVJSYu
2013-02-17 8:27 pm Storygeeks I'LL BE COMING TO LONDON TO TEACH MY PREMISE
DEVELOPMENT CLASS AT SOME POINT :)n #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:28 pm teenierussell RT @Storygeeks: @BrevityRulesok... Premise is the entire structgure
of your story in one line... theme is the moral question... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:28 pm Storygeeks @bang2write... yeah... but the "what if" is really more clued into the
log line... in my opinion... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:28 pm Storygeeks Please read my article on Script Magazine on high concept... it's very
helpful... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:30 pm BrevityRulesOK So you should be able to clearly identify 1. theme 2. premise line 3.
logline. This will crystallize your development process. #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:30 pm Bang2write @Storygeeks so where is the hook, the logline or premise line? #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:30 pm teenierussell RT @Storygeeks: ILL BE COMING TO LONDON TO TEACH MY
PREMISE DEVELOPMENT CLASS AT SOME POINT :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:30 pm Storygeeks Here is link: http://t.co/rkoormX8 #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:31 pm scriptguyphil @Storygeeks i disagree. 'what if...' takes you through the entirety of
the story, otherwise it would stop halfway through!! #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:31 pm Storygeeks @bang2write: hook is part of the logline... is in convened in the
premise... sure... but doesn't have to be... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:31 pm BrevityRulesOK Thanks for link.n #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:32 pm Storygeeks @bang2write:... the premise line is for you as the writer to guide you...
it's not for the ptich fest... it's your lifeline #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:32 pm Storygeeks @sritpguyphil... "What if martians invaded the earth?" Uh.. how does
this take you through the entire story? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:33 pm teenierussell We're halfway through Euro #scriptchat with guest @Storygeeks
talking about stories #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:34 pm Storygeeks You can see the problem here in this chat... there is no consensus on
these important ideas... I'm trying to fix that :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:34 pm Storygeeks Premise line is the #1 issue I work on with my consulting clients... #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:35 pm Storygeeks and dont' even get me going on writer's block :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:35 pm teenierussell So once you have an idea and are able to write a premise line, that's
your story? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:36 pm BrevityRulesOK If there is no consensus here, where is there consensus on these
concepts? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:36 pm storydepth The 7 Deadly Dialogue Sins: After decades in the biz, these are the
dialogue errors I see over... http://t.co/IvNcizL3 #scriptchat #botw
2013-02-17 8:36 pm scriptmag The 7 Deadly Dialogue Sins: After decades in the biz, these are the
dialogue errors I see over and o... http://t.co/4YcWsrtJ #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:36 pm Storygeeks @teenierussell.... no... that's the big-picture map of your story... it's
the banks of the river that form the flow ... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:37 pm scriptguyphil @Storygeeks because you don't just ask 'what if' once - you ask it
through the entire script (at least we do in europe!) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:37 pm A2Jason RT @scriptmag: The 7 Deadly Dialogue Sins: After decades in the
biz, these are the dialogue errors I see over and o...
http://t.co/4YcWsrtJ #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:37 pm Bang2write @Storygeeks premise is a great guide for writers, I agree; but I think
its function in pitches also important TBH #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:37 pm Storygeeks @teenierussell... but now you have a guide... the carnary in the coal
mine... when you go off on a tangent... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:37 pm Storygeeks @teenierussell... the premise line can help you find your way back to
the story... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:38 pm Storygeeks @bang2write... YES... I AGREE.. it is important.. but you would write
it differentoly for the pitch... more seducdtive #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:38 pm ScriptPunk Anyone know much about getting rights to a book? #scriptchat #gfilm
2013-02-17 8:38 pm teenierussell @Storygeeks Gotcha! #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:39 pm Storygeeks @scriptguyphil... well... you guys have always been head of the curve
compared to us US folks ... :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:40 pm Storygeeks @scriptpunk... yes... it's the same as for a script... :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:41 pm richionwurah RT @scriptmag: The 7 Deadly Dialogue Sins: After decades in the
biz, these are the dialogue errors I see over and o...
http://t.co/4YcWsrtJ #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:41 pm Bang2write @Storygeeks why not seal it in from the off and seduce YOURSELF
first? If you don't believe 100%, no one else will ;) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:41 pm Storygeeks The premise line also helps you avoid a huge problem.. what I call
backing into your story... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:41 pm rdlln Contact directly if possible, use rep or lawyer if not RT @ScriptPunk:
Anyone know much about getting rights to a book? #scriptchat #gfilm
2013-02-17 8:41 pm mb_hatter RT @scriptmag: The 7 Deadly Dialogue Sins: After decades in the
biz, these are the dialogue errors I see over and o...
http://t.co/4YcWsrtJ #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:42 pm SabinaGiado Delving into my protagonist. I can see her now - I know what gives her
pain & joy, where she comes from and what she shuts out. #
scriptchat.
2013-02-17 8:42 pm BrevityRulesOK Backing into your story?n #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:42 pm Storygeeks @bang2write... what I mean is... you leave some detaiils out of your
pitch to lure them... you already are in love w/ ur story.. #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:43 pm Storygeeks Backing into ur story means you write write write and then lose ur
way... then... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:43 pm Storygeeks ... backtrack and finally do a premise line only to discover you have
writing the wrong bloody story..... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:43 pm girl_onthego RT @ScriptPunk: Anyone know much about getting rights to a book?
#scriptchat #gfilm
2013-02-17 8:44 pm Storygeeks .. You started your process in the wrong place (writing first) then
backtracked when you should have started with the prmise #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:44 pm Storygeeks I have this problem with writers all the time... they are not happy when
I tell them they wasted months of time writing a book #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:45 pm Storygeeks Better to know you don't have a story with legs at the premise level..
rahter than on page 400... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:45 pm BrevityRulesOK What would be your recommended process before starting to write
the story?n #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:46 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... Gr8 question... I think everyone is unique that
way... but... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:47 pm M__Lou RT @scriptmag: The 7 Deadly Dialogue Sins: After decades in the
biz, these are the dialogue errors I see over and o...
http://t.co/4YcWsrtJ #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:47 pm teenierussell @Storygeeks Do you test the premise on other people to see if it
really works? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:47 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... what I wud recommend: First premise line (takes
weeks to get it right)...then... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:48 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... then do the log line... then give both of these to ppl
who know story and get feedback... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:48 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... don't give it to your mother... she'll jus tell you what
you want to hear.. :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:48 pm BrevityRulesOK @robinbellwriter missing your #scriptchat hashtag. Reading your
convo with Teenie on the side :-) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:49 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... then when you know you have a story and not
something else... you are ready to start pages... or an outline #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:49 pm frogfall RT @Storygeeks: Better to know you don't have a story with legs at
the premise level.. rahter than on page 400... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:49 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok.. ru getting my responses... :( #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:50 pm BrevityRulesOK So you develop the premise line out of the rough idea you have of the
theme? Or do you discover the theme as you go? #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:50 pm Storygeeks @teenierussell... yes... absolutely.. see my reply to @brevityrulesok #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:50 pm BrevityRulesOK I am getting your response. Thanks. Just slow updating.n #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:51 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... gr8 question... the theme comes from the moral
probolem of your protagonist... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:51 pm BrevityRulesOK Yupn #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:51 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... the moral problem of the protagonist drives your
entire story and sets the theme— critical structure element #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:52 pm teenierussell @BrevityRulesOK oops, sorry. #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:52 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... theme doesn't come from developing the prmise..
.unless it does... :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:52 pm BrevityRulesOK This is really helpful. Thank you!n #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:53 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... this is not about some paint-by-nubmerrs thiing..
everyone will get their in a unique way... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:53 pm teenierussell RT @Storygeeks: @brevityrulesok... gr8 question... the theme comes
from the moral probolem of your protagonist... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:53 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... but I'm offering an approach that works.. just make
it your own and run with it... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:53 pm GREGBIELA RT @jeannevb: Tonight on EURO & USA #scriptchat guest
@storygeeks talking what makes a story a story http://t.co/zzqVJSYu
2013-02-17 8:54 pm BrevityRulesOK I understand. Paint by numbers doesn't help, but understanding
structure does. #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:55 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok..... YEP... structure is king... sturcture is the one tool
every writer needs to learn about... but most don't #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:55 pm teenierussell @Storygeeks @BrevityRulesOK Yes, seeing how others do it always
helps, even if it's not how we end up doing it ourselves #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:55 pm robinbellwriter @BrevityRulesOK my fault I missed the #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:56 pm Storygeeks @teenierussell... yes... My mantra: Listen to everyone, try
everything... follow no one... ur your own guru .... :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:56 pm BrevityRulesOK My approach has been similar. Ask 'what if?' to kickstart the idea.
Then work through the premise. Then develop a logline. #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:56 pm teenierussell RT @Storygeeks YEP... structure is king... sturcture is the one tool
every writer needs to learn about... but most dont #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:57 pm BrevityRulesOK Logline is the tough part for me. Then outline in detail. Only then start
writing, All the way through the writing, check theme #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:57 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... then you are a smart guy ... :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:58 pm Storygeeks @brevityrulesok... if log line is tough then read my article on high
concept in script magazine... it will help... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:58 pm arbutus_films RT @scriptmag: The 7 Deadly Dialogue Sins: After decades in the
biz, these are the dialogue errors I see over and o...
http://t.co/4YcWsrtJ #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:58 pm BrevityRulesOK I try to work smart. That helps with getting lost in the fog :-) #
scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:59 pm ozzywood Silver Linings Playbook - 30min featurette http://t.co/Y8o5nPRY
#screenwriting #amwriting #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:59 pm Storygeeks Please visit my website http://t.co/um3NWv3e and "like" me on
Facebook http://t.co/antr8g4X... :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 8:59 pm teenierussell Thank you for the chat @Storygeeks I'll have to read back the
transcript, so much info! #scriptchat
2013-02-17 9:00 pm Storygeeks And watch out for me in London... I'm coming to teach there... early
next year or late 2013 :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 9:00 pm teenierussell RT @Storygeeks: Please visit my website http://t.co/um3NWv3e and
"like" me on Facebook http://t.co/antr8g4X... :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 9:00 pm Storygeeks HAD A BALL... THANK YOU FOR HAVING ME... IT WAS FUN
BEING HAD... #scriptchat
2013-02-17 9:01 pm teenierussell Fantastic! RT: @StorygeeksnAnd watch out for me in London... I'm
coming to teach there... early next year or late 2013 :) #scriptchat
2013-02-17 9:02 pm BrevityRulesOK @Storygeeks Thanks so much. Much to think about. Defining the
hard things always makes the journey easier. #scriptchat

USA CHAT

2013-02-18 1:00 am zacsanford It's #Scriptchat o'clock. Please welcome our guest Jeff Lyons
(@storygeeks). http://t.co/o7i1YM3P talking about "testing ideas."
2013-02-18 1:00 am Jamie_LD Yes folks, it's #scriptchat o'clock and we have wonderful guest
@Storygeeks tonight.
2013-02-18 1:00 am princess_scribe RT @zacsanford: It's #Scriptchat o'clock. Please welcome our guest
Jeff Lyons (@storygeeks). http://t.co/o7i1YM3P talking about "testing
ideas."
2013-02-18 1:00 am SarahAlexis4 Time for #scriptchat, discussing what makes a story a story with
guest @storygeeks.
2013-02-18 1:00 am Storygeeks Ok... Storygeeks is in the house... let'r rip...n #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:00 am GoIntoTheStory Daily Dialogue theme for the week: Wedding toast. Today: "Old
School" http://t.co/s1JY45Ff #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:01 am RWWFilm Welcome to #scriptchat @Storygeeks !
2013-02-18 1:01 am zacsanford2 @Storygeeks - First off, thanks for doing double duty on both chats
today. Hopefully it won't be too much repetition. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:01 am ChipNotDonald @zacsanford @Storygeeks Watching "Dirty Harry" along with #
scriptchat tonight. Do I feel lucky?
2013-02-18 1:01 am SarahAlexis4 @Storygeeks Hello and welcome! #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:01 am nisajaie RT @zacsanford: It's #Scriptchat o'clock. Please welcome our guest
Jeff Lyons (@storygeeks). http://t.co/o7i1YM3P talking about "testing
ideas."
2013-02-18 1:01 am Storygeeks So... what's a story... I asked my workshop yesterday and got 15 diff
answers... how is that possible? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:01 am zacsanford2 If you have any questions regarding "testing ideas
2013-02-18 1:01 am art1032 Hello #scriptchat :)
2013-02-18 1:02 am Storygeeks As writers we should all pretty much have a consensus about this...
yes? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:02 am Storygeeks NOT... never assume... :)n #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:02 am Storygeeks So... let me kick it off by saying... Premise and the Premise LIne are
the keys to knowing if you have a story... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:03 am ChipNotDonald @Storygeeks What's consensus? Especially as relates to writing and
story. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:03 am Storygeeks Lots of people think they're writing a story and they aren't... not bad or
wrong... but they're not telling a story... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:04 am kim_garland RT @zacsanford: It's #Scriptchat o'clock. Please welcome our guest
Jeff Lyons (@storygeeks). http://t.co/o7i1YM3P talking about "testing
ideas."
2013-02-18 1:04 am Storygeeks @chipnotdonald... consensus means... communal agreement... #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:04 am SarahAlexis4 @Storygeeks In addition to premise lines what work do you suggest
doing in early dev. to test the strength of a story concept?n #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:05 am Storygeeks @chipnotdonald... like all surgeons agree on the meaning of a
scalpel... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:05 am RWWFilm @Storygeeks Difference between Premise Line and Logline? PL
explores the story for yourself and LL is to sell to others? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:05 am Storygeeks @sarahalexis4...gr8 question... I suggest... first figuring out if you
have a story vs. a situationn #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:06 am JonFour Checking in to #scriptchat. Sounds like a good topic.
2013-02-18 1:06 am ChipNotDonald @Storygeeks Coming at this cold, I'd say "story" is more subjective to
define than "scalpel," though. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:06 am Storygeeks @rwwfilm... kind of... :) Premise line is the total structure of your story
told in one line... it is for you. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:07 am Storygeeks @rwwfilm... log line is your high concept in a short sentence "Monster
shark terrorizes small coastal town" Jaws #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:07 am Storygeeks @rwwfilm... Premise is your canary in the coal mine.. it keeps you on
the straight and narrow ... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:08 am Storygeeks @rrwfilm... log line give you an idea how high concept your story is..
see my article in script magazine on this... link coming #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:08 am RWWFilm @Storygeeks Love that analogy. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:09 am Al_1701 So, when making a log line should be how you sell your idea and a
premise line is the guide for your writing. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:09 am Storygeeks @chipnotdonald... yeah... I agree... but few writers really "get" what a
premise is... they think its just a pitch tool #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:09 am Storygeeks @chipnotdonald... it is so much more... hugely so.. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:09 am ChipNotDonald @Storygeeks Ahhh...that makes sense. I'm probably in that group
too. I'm looking forward to hearing it defined. =) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:09 am Storygeeks @Al 1701... Yes... but log line also helps your writing... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:11 am zacsanford2 @Storygeeks Q. So how can you test your idea to know if you have a
feature script in the concept? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:11 am Storygeeks Definition: A story premise is a container that holds the essence of
your story’s right, true, and natural structure.n #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:11 am Al_1701 Like I've had this idea since I was in grade school. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:11 am RWWFilm @Storygeeks For comparison. What would the Premise Line for Jaws
be by your definition? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:12 am Al_1701 The sun has destroyed the inner Solar System and Mankind lives on
the moons of the gas giants. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:12 am Storygeeks Definition: The log line is your high concept stated in a single (short)
sentence.n #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:12 am Al_1701 Would that be a log line or a premise line. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:12 am kim_garland Good q “@RWWFilm: @Storygeeks For comparison. What would the
Premise Line for Jaws be by your definition? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:13 am Storygeeks @rrwfilm... Jaws Premise: : When a big city-cop moves to a small
coastal town dependent on tourism, #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:13 am Storygeeks @rrwfilm...he must team with a crusty sailor and an oceanographer to
convince the doubting, money-grubbing townsfolk #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:13 am Storygeeks @rrwfilm... to close their beaches due to a giant man-eating shark,
until the shark strikes, #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:13 am Storygeeks @rrwfilm..., thus forcing the townsfolk to allow the cop and his
buddies to take on the shark mano-a-mano.n #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:14 am Storygeeks @rrwfilm... vs log line: monster shark terrorizes small coastal town...
see the difference? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:14 am Storygeeks @kim_garland... sorry ... sent your answer to @rrfilm :) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:15 am SarahAlexis4 @Storygeeks What stands out to you as red flags in a premise? And
what stands out as signs of a strong premise? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:15 am Storygeeks @AI_1701.. .that would be more log line... Premise gives the entire
strucgture of your story !!! That's a huge difference #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:15 am zacsanford2 @Storygeeks I'd still say add more than just "monster shark terrorizes
small coastal town" as a logline in a query letter. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:15 am ericnjones @Al_1701 Sounds intriguing. As a writer, I'd want to be able to write
that. As a reader, I'd want to read that. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:16 am CrispyPhoenix RT @Cilly247: My good friend Lisa is making a short film. Pls come
see what its all about, thanks!x http://t.co/sXsggIh8 #SupportIndieFilm
#scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:16 am Phucopheles A log line is a broad overview in one sentence, while a premise
describes the major elements in order. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:16 am Storygeeks @SarahAlexis4... red flags: no protagonist, no moral problem defined,
no opponent structure defined, no core relationship defind #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:16 am zacsanford2 @Storygeeks I'd go somewhere in the middle of your examples of
logline and premise to sell the concept. Maybe that's just me. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:16 am kim_garland @Storygeeks PL seems very helpful. I write LL but feels limiting in
early stages of script. PL gives bigger path to follow #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:16 am Storygeeks @sarahalexis4... strong items: all the things present I just red flagged
:) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:17 am zacsanford2 Last week's podcast by @starterscript had a great discussion on
loglines. Check it out. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:17 am ericnjones RT @Storygeeks: @SarahAlexis4... red flags: no protagonist, no
moral problem defined, no opponent structure defined, no core
relationship defind #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:17 am Storygeeks @Phucopheles... yeah, that's how most writers see them... I think this
is very short sighted... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:18 am Storygeeks @zacsanfor2... No.. I agree... selling and writing are two diff
problems... how you sell your story #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:18 am Phucopheles I would guess that a logline allows a script reader to quickly tell if that
is their type of script and either read or not read #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:18 am art1032 RT @zacsanford2: Last week's podcast by @starterscript had a great
discussion on loglines. Check it out. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:18 am Storygeeks @zacsanford2... isn't how you build tools for your writing process...
premise line is for you to help you through process #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:19 am Storygeeks @phucopheles... absolutely... lots of business reasons for a log line..
but it also helps you as a writer gage high concept #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:20 am Storygeeks I'm about helping writers write.. not just sell, if you don't have a story
you won't get in anyone's door unless your JJ Abrams #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:21 am zacsanford2 Reminder, if you have any questions about "testing your ideas
2013-02-18 1:21 am ChipNotDonald @Storygeeks @zacsanford2 So how would you relate the premise
line to a beat sheet? #Scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:21 am Storygeeks and bar none, the biggest issue writers have is knowing if they have a
story or not... it's not as obvious as you might assume #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:21 am Al_1701 A log line could also be worked into tag lines for advertisement. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:21 am Storygeeks for example... Cloverfield, Contagion, Murder She Wrote...
entertaining situations... not stories... (and made lots of $$$ :)) #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:22 am PitchfestBob RT @Storygeeks: the biggest issue writers have is knowing if they
have a story or not... its not as obvious as you might assume #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:22 am Storygeeks @Al_1701.. Yep... and often are... but again... sales are important...
but you have to know if your story is going to work first #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:23 am zacsanford2 @Storygeeks Q. So how does one take their PL to test to see if they
have a full story and not just a situation. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:23 am SarahAlexis4 @Storygeeks Q: What are some elements you have found to be
universal in strong story concepts? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:23 am art1032 RT @PitchfestBob: RT @Storygeeks: the biggest issue writers have
is knowing if they have a story or not... its not as obvious as you might
assume #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:23 am Storygeeks My premise development apporach assures you that you will know
early on if your story will work... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:23 am Al_1701 I've found you know you have a story when the writing comes easily.
It just seems to flow. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:23 am Storygeeks better to know at the premise level if you story has legs (or not) than
on page 120 (or 400)... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:24 am Storygeeks @AL_1701... Ok.. I had a woman who wrote a 500pg book on her trip
to Peru... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:24 am Storygeeks @AL_1701... the writing flowed, easy, joyful... for 4 YEARS she
wrote... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:24 am ericnjones @Storygeeks Q. Once you've developed premise, logline, etc - who
do you pitch it to to "test the idea"? Friends? Fellow writers? #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:24 am Storygeeks @AL_1701... and then everybody told her it sucked and she was
clueless... she had a traveloge, not a story... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:25 am Storygeeks @Al_1701...sometimes writing ease is a clue, but better you rely on
tools... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:25 am ericnjones @Storygeeks ... what may be a great idea to me, may not be to
anyone else. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:26 am Storygeeks @ericnjones...gr8 question... unit test your stuff with people who know
story... not your mother... you dont' have time ... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:26 am Storygeeks @ericnjones... talk to people who know what they're doing... #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:26 am Phucopheles Q Is there room in HC features commercially to build complex,
engaging characters? Or is it all whiz-bang now? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:27 am Storygeeks @ericnjones... exactly... so get opinions of people your respect... at
the end of the day you have to love what you're writing.. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:27 am Al_1701 RT @Storygeeks: I belong to a writing board. Is that a good place to
bounce around ideas? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:27 am Storygeeks @Phucopheles... Not sure what you mean... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:27 am wcmartell @ericnjones I tell friends who regularly go to the movies that I saw a
test screening with Brendan Fraser - then pitch my story. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:28 am DannyManus When you pitch people your idea, gauge their reactions to know if
you're emotionally connecting and selling it right #scriptchat #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:28 am Storygeeks @AL_1701 ... HA... see my article on writing groups in Script
Magazine... I will say no more... :) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:28 am Storygeeks @wcmartell.... HA!!! #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:29 am zacsanford2 RT @DannyManus: When you pitch people your idea, gauge their
reactions 2 know if youre emotionally connecting & selling it right #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:29 am hayphoto_ca Join me for a #scriptchat TweetChat at: http://t.co/GDwi27mr #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:30 am zacsanford2 Here is @Storygeek's article on Writing Groups: http://t.co/GtPn0ADw
#scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:30 am Storygeeks Here is the high-concept article: http://t.co/rkoormX8 #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:30 am zacsanford2 So we're at the halfway point. Make sure you get those questions into
@Storygeeks regarding "testing your ideas". #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:30 am jpopefilms Just discovered #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:30 am PAX_Tweets RT @zacsanford2: Here is @Storygeek's article on Writing Groups:
http://t.co/GtPn0ADw #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:30 am GoIntoTheStory Interview: 20-minute video with Judd Apatow, Buck Henry, Jon Lucas
and Harold Ramis http://t.co/k6GQKzT6 #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:30 am Storygeeks Here is writing grps: http://t.co/1w0KhQY2 #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:31 am art1032 RT @zacsanford2: Here is @Storygeek's article on Writing Groups:
http://t.co/GtPn0ADw #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:31 am zacsanford2 @jpopefilms Welcome... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:31 am art1032 RT @Storygeeks: Here is the high-concept article:
http://t.co/rkoormX8 #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:31 am hayphoto_ca @zacsanford2 but when you pitch, are you gauging producer reaction
or friends who aren't thinking the commercial viability? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:31 am Storygeeks halfway already... wow... having fun... din't even noticen #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:31 am Al_1701 RT @Storygeeks: @AL_1701 ... HA... see my article on writing
groups in Script Magazine The Be Afraid article? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:32 am zacsanford2 @hayphoto_ca I pitch my ideas to people who know story, execs and
also the random average moviegoer. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:32 am Storygeeks @hayphoto... Pitching isn't my thing... I'm about giving writers tools for
productivity... fyi #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:33 am DannyManus @Storygeeks I've always said 90% of writers groups are just the blind
leading the blind. Good article. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:33 am hayphoto_ca @zacsanford2 how do you connect with the "random average
moviegoer
2013-02-18 1:33 am Storygeeks If you go away with anytghing from this... I want to give you two ideas:
Premise is your lifeline... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am hayphoto_ca @Storygeeks what kind of tools? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am hayphoto_ca Sorry I came in late #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am zacsanford2 @Storygeeks You have a solid PL, a solid outline... yet somehow the
script still comes up short. Ideas? Suggestions? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am brunospaws RT @GoIntoTheStory: Interview: 20-minute video with Judd Apatow,
Buck Henry, Jon Lucas and Harold Ramis http://t.co/k6GQKzT6 #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am Storygeeks ... and learn story structure... you are writing with both arms tied
behind your back if you don't know structure... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am zacsanford2 @hayphoto_ca Friends and family members not in the business. As
long as they promise to be honest. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am zilkerfilms RT @GoIntoTheStory Interview: 20-minute video with Judd Apatow,
Buck Henry, Jon Lucas and Harold Ramis http://t.co/4iC0iWXW #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am ChipNotDonald @DannyManus @Storygeeks I'm assuming that writers' websites like
Zoetrope are even worse? The dead leading the blind? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am wcmartell @hayphoto_ca No - you need people who go to the cinema on a
regular basis. That's not the average person. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am AndreaLMcNeill @hayphoto_ca It's really hard to write for the market. Write what you
want, what's in your heart, but learn how to do it well #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am zacsanford2 @DannyManus @Storygeeks I agree on most writing groups being
bad, but I think I finally found a really solid one. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:34 am Storygeeks @hayphoto: tools: my 7 step premise development process (&
workshop) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:35 am Jamie_LD RT @Storygeeks: ... learn story structure... you are writing with both
arms tied behind your back if you don't know structure #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:35 am Storygeeks @hayphoto... my story development methodolgy using the
Enneagram system... Enneagram-STory Bridge... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:35 am ericnjones RT @Storygeeks: Here is writing grps: http://t.co/1w0KhQY2 #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:35 am hayphoto_ca @zacsanford2 ah... yes but so often I've heard honest people say
nice things and even I see problems... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:36 am art1032 @hayphoto_ca Welcome and don't worry,what u missed will be
posted in a transcript:) Enjoy:) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:36 am ChipNotDonald RT @Jamie_LD: RT @Storygeeks: ... learn story structure... you are
writing with both arms tied behind your back if you don't know
structure #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:36 am hayphoto_ca @wcmartell how often is regular basis? I generally see at least 1
movie a week, recently its been a lot of screeners. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:36 am Storygeeks @zacsanford2... but friends and family unless they are execs at
Paramount don't know squat about story... I'm just sayin' #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:36 am zacsanford2 @hayphoto_ca Easy way to test if they're honest... come up with the
worst pitch possible and see what their reaction is. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:36 am wcmartell The reason why I say I saw a test screening is so people won't worry
about offending me. It was some crappy Brendan Fraser film. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:36 am DannyManus @ChipNotDonald Some are better than others, but most peer review
sites are a waste of time and energy #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:36 am Storygeeks @zacsanford2... HA... I guess that might work ... :) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:36 am zacsanford2 @Storygeeks friends and family are more for the hook/concept.
Industry peeps are more for story. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:36 am hayphoto_ca @AndreaLMcNeill I write what I want, but I've been mainly in short
stories. Often casting one day, write to casting, then shoot #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:36 am Jamie_LD LMAO, good idea. RT @zacsanford2: @hayphoto_ca ...come up with
the worst pitch possible and see what their reaction is. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:37 am wcmartell @hayphoto_ca That is regular. I know people who haven't seen a
movie in the cinema in *years* - maybe decades! #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:37 am hayphoto_ca @AndreaLMcNeill but those are short stories, now I'm looking to
make web-series and feature so I need more story building skills #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:37 am Storygeeks Re getting help: my mantra: listen to everyone, try everything...
follow no one. you are ur own guru. I hate gurus... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:37 am JonFour @Storygeeks What is "structure" to you? 3-act? Heroes' Journey?
Something else? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:38 am AndreaLMcNeill At some point you have to stop looking for help/advice and just do it.
Everyone has a different opinion. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:38 am PAX_Tweets RT @Storygeeks: Re getting help: my mantra: listen to everyone, try
everything... follow no one. you are ur own guru. I hate gurus... #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:38 am hayphoto_ca @wcmartell wow... decades. All TV watchers or they just no fiction at
all? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:38 am ericnjones RT @Storygeeks: Re getting help: my mantra: listen to everyone, try
everything... follow no one. you are ur own guru. I hate gurus... #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:38 am Storygeeks @jonfour... 3 acts is bull. It is not about writing... run the other way
from 3 acts.. useless... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:38 am zacsanford2 RT @AndreaLMcNeill: At some point you have to stop looking for
help/advice and just do it. Everyone has a different opinion. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:39 am art1032 RT @AndreaLMcNeill: At some point you have to stop looking for
help/advice and just do it. Everyone has a different opinion. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:39 am DannyManus @Storygeeks I dont even think Gurus like being called gurus. It's just
a label OTHER people put on them. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:39 am AndreaLMcNeill @hayphoto_ca Structure is KING. Learn it. Live it. Write it. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:39 am hayphoto_ca @AndreaLMcNeill Oh I do just do, made 13 short films (many I have
also wrote) in the last 3 years. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:39 am wcmartell @hayphoto_ca TV. They never leave the house. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:39 am Storygeeks @jonfour... story structure is the natural structure of every story... too
complicated for a chat... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:39 am art1032 RT @Storygeeks: @jonfour... 3 acts is bull. It is not about writing...
run the other way from 3 acts.. useless... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:39 am GCGeek @zacsanford2 @Storygeeks I like to test w/reg folks for emotional
response. Then folks in the know for story/marketability. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:39 am hayphoto_ca @Storygeeks "three acts is bull" I was just told the opposite today,
elaborate? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:40 am AndreaLMcNeill @hayphoto_ca Then maybe you should be telling us. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:40 am Storygeeks @andrealmcneill... YEP #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:40 am scriptdreric Perhaps unrelated to the conversation on #Scriptchat, but the
Support Something Sunday project for this week is...
http://t.co/ByQJNdeN
2013-02-18 1:40 am AndreaLMcNeill @hayphoto_ca Hollywood wants a three act structure. Sorry. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:40 am Storygeeks @HAYPHOTO... acts are part of physcial stage production, not
writing... story structure forms your story, not acts #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:41 am LynneRice story structure simplified .... and then what happened..... and how did
it end up? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:41 am zacsanford2 RT @scriptdreric: Unrelated to the conversation, but the Support
Something Sunday project for this week... http://t.co/K2bLohgX #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:41 am hayphoto_ca @AndreaLMcNeill oh no, I'm no expert. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:41 am Storygeeks @hayphoto... only commercial tv uses acts (and theatre) so they can
sell soap... it has nothing to do with storytelling #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:41 am Jamie_LD @zacsanford2 DM #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:41 am Storygeeks @andrealmcneill... yes, they do... so we comply ... but we don't have
to.. if we rely on structure... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:41 am wcmartell Act 1: You get your cat up a tree.nAct 2: You throw rocks at him.nAct
3: You get him down from the tree. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:42 am NiceConundrum Love @jengrisanti ABC's of story structure! Excited for tonight! The
chat is already hopping! #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:42 am AndreaLMcNeill And they want a log line. Hollywood DEMANDS the one sentence
description of what your movie is. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:42 am Jamie_LD I second that. RT @AndreaLMcNeill: @hayphoto_ca Structure is
KING. Learn it. Live it. Write it. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:42 am sdarancette If anyone cares, here is the link to tonight's live stream of the WGA
AWARDS: http://t.co/ojWIwhDi #tvwriterchat #scriptchat #writing
2013-02-18 1:42 am zacsanford2 @Jamie_LD ha ha... I was just getting ready to write to you. :) #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:42 am ericnjones A story about family, greed, religion, & oil, centered around a
turn-of-the-century prospector in the early days of the business #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:42 am PitchfestBob RT @wcmartell: Act 1: You get your cat up a tree.Act 2: You throw
rocks at him.Act 3: You get him down from the tree. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:42 am Storygeeks I'll be writing an article for Script Mag on 3-act structure and why it is
useles... fyi #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:43 am zacsanford2 While @Storygeeks may say "three acts is bull"... all studio movies
fall into a version of the three act structure. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:43 am art1032 RT @sdarancette: If anyone cares, here is the link to tonight's live
stream of the WGA AWARDS: http://t.co/ojWIwhDi #tvwriterchat #
scriptchat #writing
2013-02-18 1:43 am Storygeeks @andrealmcneill... yes re log line... and you need one as a writer... it
helps you gauge your high concept... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:43 am zacsanford2 curious to read. RT @Storygeeks: Ill be writing an article for Script
Mag on 3-act structure and why it is useles... fyi #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:43 am ericnjones @Storygeeks If someone other than PTA had pitched the logline for
THERE WILL BE BLOOD - he probably would be told to can it. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:44 am zacsanford2 @Storygeeks So would you also say The Hero's Journey or Save the
Cat is also bull? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:44 am hayphoto_ca @zacsanford2 thats what I mean, so which is it? 3 acts or just write a
story and see where the chips land? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:44 am Storygeeks @zacsanford2... yeah... I know they think they do... :) complicated for
a chat session... I think its all smoke and morrors #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:44 am DannyManus @ericnjones This doesn't tell us what the story is about...so is this a
premise line? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:44 am wcmartell @zacsanford2 Plus, 3 act structure has been around about 2,400
years - and has been used to create stories since then. Basic. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:44 am Al_1701 Why do I even try? I'm stuck in Michigan. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:44 am TheWriteScript @AndreaLMcNeill I hear ya. #scriptchat #screenwriting #wisdom
2013-02-18 1:45 am ericnjones Many writers I know only seem excited when they hear the words:
contained, zombie, werewolf, vampire, etc... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:45 am Storygeeks @hayphoto... if you learn story structure the chips will land properly...
3 acts won't even enter into it... honest #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:45 am hayphoto_ca @Storygeeks but if it works, so what if its smoke and mirrors. Main
goal is to write a story that someone can follow and enjoyn #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:45 am anniewood YES!“@AndreaLMcNeill: At some point you have to stop looking for
help/advice and just do it. Everyone has a different opinion. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:45 am DannyManus @storygeeks Saying 3 Act structure is bull is misleading. It's
necessary for hwood. Perhaps some format of 3 act is bull #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:45 am wcmartell @ericnjones THERE WILL BE BLOOD is based on a famous novel,
so he just had to show up with the book. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:45 am zacsanford2 @hayphoto_ca I follow Hero's Journey/STC for when I outline. Which
is just a diferent version of the 3 act structure. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:45 am Al_1701 How can I get noticed by people who could help me get a career
started? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:45 am nisajaie RT @Storygeeks: I'll be writing an article for Script Mag on 3-act
structure and why it is useles... fyi #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:45 am Storygeeks #wcmartell... no... 3 acts was popularized in the modern era... the
Greeks used acts as part of scene trnasitions... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:46 am zacsanford2 RT @DannyManus: Saying 3 Act structure is bull is misleading. Its
necessary for hwood. Perhaps some format of 3 act is bull #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:46 am rdlln -- @DannyManus @Storygeeks I prefer a wide range of free
feedback on the initial drafts before paying for 1 professional opinion
#scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:46 am Storygeeks @wcmartell... but it was never the rule... Syd Field brought us this gift
33 years ago... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:46 am Jamie_LD @ericnjones HEY! I'm writing a contained zombie, werewolf, vampire
screenplay! (I'm kidding! lol) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:46 am DannyManus @Al_1701 Write better than everyone else. That's all it is. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:46 am Al_1701 3 Act seems to work more for half hour television shows. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:47 am robjasonclark RT @Jamie_LD: I second that. RT @AndreaLMcNeill: @hayphoto_ca
Structure is KING. Learn it. Live it. Write it. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:47 am Al_1701 It helps place the breaks. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:47 am Jamie_LD Best advice EVER! lol RT @DannyManus: @Al_1701 Write better
than everyone else. That's all it is. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:47 am Storygeeks @zacsanford... yes.. I love Chris... but hero's journey is not as
universal as the book suggests... long discussion:) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:47 am ericnjones @wcmartell Yeah, but the thought of adapting Upton Sinclair wouldn't
exactly light execs' hair on fire either. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:47 am Storygeeks @dannymanus... you said it... :) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:47 am LynneRice @Jamie_LD a zombie procedural hehe #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:47 am hayphoto_ca @Storygeeks but it works' doesn't it? I'm looking at a collaboration for
a web-series and a feature this year... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:47 am Al_1701 @DannyManus How do I get it to the eyeballs though? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:47 am wcmartell @Storygeeks I sold my first produced script *before* Syd Field - and
every interview with a writer I read mentioned 3 acts. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:48 am SarahAlexis4 @zacsanford2 I usually do that too. Find a beat sheet helps me flesh
out the story and see where/how something may be lacking. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:48 am Jamie_LD @LynneRice Hahaha! #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:48 am Storygeeks @AL_17-1... yes.. .tv needs acts for commercials... tv is a selling
medium,not an entertainment medium... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:48 am DannyManus @Jamie_LD Thanks! Everyone ALWAYS asks -how do I get noticed?
That's the honest simple answer - write better than everyone else. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:48 am robjasonclark RT @Jamie_LD: Best advice EVER! lol RT @DannyManus:
@Al_1701 Write better than everyone else. That's all it is. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:48 am hayphoto_ca @Storygeeks ... and anything I write gets made so I really want to
improve my story skills as I want a great movie/series. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:48 am hayphoto_ca RT @Storygeeks: @AL_17-1... yes.. .tv needs acts for commercials...
tv is a selling medium,not an entertainment medium... agreed #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:49 am wcmartell @Al_1701 E-query with a logline. If the concept is awesome, they will
ask to read. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:49 am hayphoto_ca @robjasonclark lol #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:49 am Storygeeks @wcmartell... it's ubiquitous... that doesn't make it "real"... this is a
tough subject for a lot of writers... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:49 am GCGeek It entertains me. RT @Storygeeks: @AL_17-1 tv needs acts for
commercials... tv is a selling medium,not an entertainment medium. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:49 am zacsanford2 @Al_1701 Win contests. Get out here and network for a vacation.
Cold call assistants to see if they accept queries. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:49 am ericnjones @wcmartell ... Beautiful film though. But this is PTA. Tough for an
unrepped scribe to do the same #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:49 am nisajaie @Storygeeks What about cable TV? Still 3 Acts? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:49 am DannyManus @Al_1701 If it's great, their eyeballs will find YOU. Social media,
Contests, pitchfests, consultants, networking events etc #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:49 am LynneRice @Al_1701 be part of the community, participate in the work of others,
network #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:49 am ruth_atkinson RT @DannyManus: @Jamie_LD Thanks! Everyone ALWAYS asks
-how do I get noticed? That's the honest simple answer - write better
than everyone else. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:50 am Jamie_LD @DannyManus So true. Read other scripts, and if you think you can
do better, DO IT! Get noticed by being a GREAT writer. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:50 am Storygeeks @GCGeek... yes... there are moments... :) we need more of them #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:50 am art1032 RT @DannyManus: @Al_1701 If it's great, their eyeballs will find
YOU. Social media, Contests, pitchfests, consultants, networking
events etc #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:50 am ericnjones @DannyManus Not sure what THAT is. You're right though, it does
read more as a premise than a logline per se. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:50 am zacsanford2 Only 10 more minutes left, so let's try to get back on topic. Send
questions to @Storygeeks re "testing your idea." #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:51 am Al_1701 @LynneRice I'm not sure what community to join. I'm a Sci-Fi fantasy
writer. Where should I go? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:51 am Storygeeks But... we see here where the focus has turned... how do I get noticed
or sell... I'm more about the writing process... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:51 am SarahAlexis4 @DannyManus Speaking of good work getting noticed, congrats on
the recent success of some of your clients you tweeted about! #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:51 am LaurieAshbourne @zacsanford2 Yes back to premise... #scriptchatn #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:52 am hayphoto_ca @Storygeeks okay so I pass my premise past industry people, how
do I get useful feedback on what the market wants #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:52 am Al_1701 Sorry for changing the subject. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:52 am Storygeeks Talent isn't enough... you have to have strong craft... that's where
story structure and premise smarts come in... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:52 am hayphoto_ca @Al_1701 comiccons, no joke #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:52 am Jamie_LD @Storygeeks The process IS the important part. You can sell if you
don't have a good grasp of the writing process. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:53 am rdlln -- @DannyManus what are your thoughts on posting entire scripts
online? Any potential downside provided it's well written? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:53 am Storygeeks @hayphoto... you will always be behind the market... by at least a
year... so get over that... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:53 am Jamie_LD @Storygeeks Oops, I meant CAN'T sell... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:53 am Storygeeks @jamie_LD... exactly... n #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:54 am Storygeeks @jamie_LD... the problem is convincing writers (especially
experienced ones) that they need to shore up things #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:54 am SarahAlexis4 @Storygeeks Q: Any suggestions for taking an idea that might start
as just a situation & developing it into a strong story? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:54 am hayphoto_ca @Storygeeks so whats your recommendation on writing something
that sells? I'm guessing write what YOU want made is the advice? #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:54 am Storygeeks Writing and storytelling are two different things and require two diff
skill sets... few writers do both well... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:54 am Jamie_LD @hayphoto_ca Great question! #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:55 am wcmartell @Jamie_LD I can't SPELL. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:55 am zacsanford2 Chasing trends is bad RT @Storygeeks: @hayphoto you will always
be behind the market... by at least a year... so get over that. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:55 am zacsanford2 I see what you did there. RT @Jamie_LD: @Storygeeks Oops, I
meant CANT sell... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:55 am Storygeeks @sarahAlexis... YES... always go back to having a protagonist with a
moral problem.. situations don't have that... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:55 am Jamie_LD @wcmartell Haha. :-) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:55 am hayphoto_ca @wcmartell third times a charm? :) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:56 am Storygeeks @sarahalexis4... if you have a protagoinst with a moral problem then
you will have a story and not a situation (ala Cloverfield) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:56 am GCGeek @Storygeeks Look forward to reading ur articles. Having good log line
is great. Really testing/developing full story is critical #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:57 am wcmartell @hayphoto_ca Write the kind of movie you regularly pay to see. The
genre, not specifics about the genre (trends). #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:57 am ericnjones @Storygeeks Q. So to summarize: a good premise is....? And a bad
premise is...? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:57 am Storygeeks But... situations make lots of money :) So, i have no judgements about
weak stories...question is what do you want to do? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:57 am hayphoto_ca @Storygeeks so mainly to build a good story you need a lot in the
character development, mainly plot of moral choices. #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:57 am Storygeeks Be conscious abouyt what you are writing... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:58 am Al_1701 @wcmartell Which is why I write science fiction and fantasy. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:58 am LaurieAshbourne RT @Storygeeks: @sarahalexis4 if you have a protag with a moral
problem then you have a story not a situation (ala Cloverfield) #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:58 am Storygeeks @ericnjones: a good premise is your story's structure revealed in one
sentence (very hard to do) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:58 am hayphoto_ca @wcmartell I've seen so many pre-screenings recently, pay? But
yeah I'm going to write what I want to make into a movie #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:58 am Storygeeks @ericnjones... a bad premise IS BORING #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:58 am Storygeeks @Al_1701... HA... love that #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:58 am hayphoto_ca So far a lot of people dieing... RT @Storygeeks: Be conscious abouyt
what you are writing... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:59 am Jamie_LD @wcmartell I say, write what you want to read 20-30 times without
getting bored. Wait, is that possible? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:59 am Storygeeks Thank you all.. pls vist http://t.co/um3NWv3e and like me on
Facebook http://t.co/antr8g4X... :))) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:59 am DannyManus @ericnjones A good premise is relatable, yet completely imaginative
& opens up many diff directions for story &characters #scriptchat
2013-02-18 1:59 am zacsanford2 I wanted to thank @storygeeks for being our guest tonight. The
transcript should be posted sometime later tonight or tomorrow. #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:00 am ericnjones RT @Storygeeks: @ericnjones: a good premise is your story's
structure revealed in one sentence (very hard to do) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:00 am ericnjones RT @Storygeeks: @ericnjones... a bad premise IS BORING #
scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:00 am wcmartell Pardon my plug: Only a few days old and #4 on Amazon's
Screenwriting list: Act Two Blue Book. http://t.co/CdafKrON Over 200
pgs #scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:00 am Storygeeks Keep an eye out for my premise workshop here in LA... I teach it a lot
at Writers Store and Writers JUnction... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:00 am Jamie_LD RT @wcmartell: Only a few days old and #4 on Amazon's
Screenwriting list: Act Two Blue Book. http://t.co/pt7ANiJf Over 200
pgs #scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:00 am hayphoto_ca @zacsanford2 @storygeeks thanks for running this! #scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:00 am GoIntoTheStory Screenwriting News: February 11-February 17, 2013
http://t.co/UDYTcguT #scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:00 am ChipNotDonald @Storygeeks Thanks for coming out tonight! An interesting #
scriptchat.
2013-02-18 2:01 am Storygeeks Thank you scriptchat US for the opportunity :) #scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:01 am art1032 Thank you @storygeeks and #scriptchat great chat as always:)
2013-02-18 2:02 am Al_1701 @Storygeeks Any way to connect online? #scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:02 am mantralarcenist “The purpose of a writer is to keep civilization from destroying itself.” -
Camus. No pressure then... #scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:02 am ericnjones RT @DannyManus: @ericnjones A good premise is relatable, yet
completely imaginative & opens up many diff directions for story
&characters #scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:02 am hayphoto_ca Well we shall see what I end up making next, film-making is always
fun when a character emerges and story is born #scriptchat
2013-02-18 2:02 am Jamie_LD @Storygeeks Thanks for chatting with us about testing your idea! #
scriptchat